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The picture shows an expending plan of the

2020-1-14 16:22| 发布者: admin| 查看: 1038| 评论: 0

简介:The picture shows an expending plan of the university sports center.

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The picture shows an expending plan of the university sports center.

 Nowadays, the sports center only have a 25m pool with single chaging room on it west.There are many seats on the east of the pool. And the small gym is on the north of the pool. Two outdoors courts are on the west and east side.

 In the future, this soprts center will be expending. At first , the original layout of this sports center will be kept and the outdoors courts will be removed. On the west courts, a new leisure pool with a changing room on it south will be built. Secondary, a sports hall will be built on the east courts. There will be two dance studio on the east of the sport hall. At the southeastern corner, another changing room will be prepared. At last, a cafe will be put on the south of the sport hall and a sports shop will be set on southwester corner of the center.

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