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490 Gera 发表于 2022-1-22 14:52:24
Student name:                Brad
IELTS Exam date:               Maybe next month
Past score:           5.0
SpeakingTarget score:                  6.0
Mock test score:                  5.0



                        



Good pronunciation
Good diction
We need to improve our sentence construction
Make it more logical
Use advance vocabulary
Speak as fast as you can
don’t be hesitant= avoid hesitation
Start learning and contact our assistant for more booking



Mock test = 5-6 minutes
Part 1= 4-5 minutes
30 seconds to answer
2-3 sentences

PArt 1

Do you like buying shoes?

Student answer: Well, my favorite shoes is nike
Suggestion:  Definitely, I love buying shoes because as ayoung man, it is normal that I always wanted to look good and confident so I usually but Nike shoes every 3 months…


How much do you spend for shoes?

Student answer: 300 -200 dollars


Suggestion: 2-3 sentences
Actually I spend 200-300 US dollar for my Nike shoes because I want it to be in good quality, and comfortable for me to use….



Part  2 Question:

Part 2=1 minute to prepare =1-2 minutes to talk

Describe a time when  you got up early
You should say :
When it was
What you did
Why you got up early
And how you felt about it

I would like to talk about a  time i got up early and that was Last week
I had final exam in school exam
So, I need to get up early, and I reviewed my lesson aso I don’t want to get late …
I felt dizzy, tired and sleepy , but it was all worth it because I got a good score in my exam because I was ready myself and I prepared a lot…


Student answer: I usually got up at 6:30am
And I usually run in the morning because running can keep my body healthy…after doing sports I can eat breakfast…
My friends usually eat mc donald but I think mc donal is not healthy so I decided to make breakfast myself..
After eating breakfast I need to study my courses

Suggestions:




Vocabulary: a night owl
An early bird
The Early bird catches the worm
Feel exhausted
Hectic schedule
Be in a hurry
In a rush
Struggle to get up in the mornings
I tend to get up
I tend to go to
                           


Shopping centrePart 3= 4-5 minutes= no limited time

General question


5-6 sentences
Why do people get up early?

Student answer: people who make breakfast

Suggestion: 5-6 sentences
Impress the xaminer
By using advance vocabulary



Well, in my opinion, people who get up early are usually workers, and students because they have no choice but to go to school or work early or else they may loose their job or they couldn’t graduate …also old people or parents because they need to prepare a lot of things especially breakfast for family…
For example my parents since I was young I notice they always wake up early just to prepare my food and my things to school…also they need to work early so I could say those kind of people usually wke up early…


What kinds of occasions need people to arrive early ?




5-6 sentences



Example:
When there is examination
Atmosphere=
Calm down
Meeting
Competition/activity
Work
Classes
Flight
But in my opinion :
But for me all occasions needed to arrive early…
To show respect and politeness to others
Suggestion:




5-6sentences                                             
  Longer
Impress the examiner

Example
Compare
Positive and negative

                                                                  

Criteria  for  6.5    score 1-2 minutes


Fluency and Coherence        •Talking at length
•Talking without pauses or hesitations
•Talking
•without self-correction
•Able to be understood
•Using cohesive devices        Firstly, secondly, finally
Then, next, after that…

Furthermore, moreover,
also
But,
nevertheless,
however

Lexical Resource        •Using a range of words and paraphrasing
•Using collocations
•Using less common vocabulary
•Avoiding errors       

reduce,reuse,recycle= phrase use to encourage people to waste less and use things again

To go green= to change one’s lifestyle to help protect the environment.

To have a green thumb = to have ability to grow plants

To go solar= to collect solar energy by using solar energy panels


Grammatical Range and Accuracy       
•Using a range of sentence structures
•Using a range of grammatical tenses
•Avoiding errors
        Sophisticated
Avoid errors
Make your answer more logical
organize


Pronunciation
        •Able to be understood throughout the test
•Able to use intonation
•Accent does not affect understanding
•Accurate word and sound pronunciation        •Alive
•Put some excitement



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